Awesome composition. :D
Very clean sound, and nice transitions. Well done!!! I would totally dance to this!! The beat is really well timed. What program did you use??
Awesome composition. :D
Very clean sound, and nice transitions. Well done!!! I would totally dance to this!! The beat is really well timed. What program did you use??
FL studio 9, with lots and lots of plugins, lol
Now I'm hunger for sushie. <3
Sounds like music I hear at a salon, or some weird vegan sushie hip joint. lol. Very relaxing, and yet the beat makes it "hip" and modern. wow. This is really cool. I'm not a very good judge of ambient music. the only criticism I have is at 3:06-ish, when it gets really weird sounding. At this point, it becomes really unnessecary, and then I was frustrated when it reached it's climax and just fizzed out. You should have gone right back into the previous beat and made that the big ending.
Anyway, nice work!!!
Thanks for the review, and about the whole climax thing: This was kind of an experiment with ambient, so.... :P
But yeah, in the future (oh, wit!) I'll probably do what you suggested. Again, thanks! :D
Also I never really thought of it as being something I would hear at a weird vegan sushi.. oh. Yeah, okay, I can see what you're getting at. xD
-SL-
Interesting....
Pretty good beat, harmony, and overall idea, but watchout for chashing as you start to build up your instruments. Around 1:30 I really started to hear that, and it kinda killed the song, so watch out! You can make it complicated, just make sure that the notes you use are all based off each other. Don't try to fit 2 unrelated segments together. That's what it felt like you did, and it got a little messy as a result. Otherwise, you have a great idea and you did a good job mixing it. With some practice, and experience, you could be making really good stuff. :)
Thanks for comments!
You are right about it getting a bit clustered in the middle. That piano was put there just for the sake of variation; perhaps I will go back and remove it. I would rather the song feel a little static than ... unenjoyable.
Excellent!
This was very well made. I curious on what programs you used to make this. Very good rythm, however it could have used a little more melody lines to bring out the beat and create a dance-like song.
Thank you very much! I used FL Studio 9 to make this. Also I can see what you mean about needing a bit more of a melody, but I was kinda going with a chill house/trance theme so I wasn't too worried about the melody being really complex or anything. Last but not least, thanks for the 9 rating! I'm glad you enjoyed my music. :D
EPIC
This peice was very intricate, but I felt like after two minutes it needed some more chord or key chance or so. However, the way you used the instruments and combined them to create different sounds and effect is really amazing. Keep up the good work. :)
Exactly why i said try to listen to the whole thing lol. Thanks for the review, im a noob at making music at the moment.
I am an amateur musician and I have been composing music for a year and a half. I hope to beome a professional musician and plan on studying piano performance in college. I hope you like what I have hear to show you. Wish me luck in college!
Age 30, Female
Phoenix AZ
Joined on 11/20/10