auroalee1's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Schoolbell Mix]

i never know what to write here

This was really good!!!! True, it could use some panning, and some changes in eq settings to give it more dynamics, but STILL!!!
Really good sound. I wish I could make something like this.

Please check out some of my work. Good luck, and keep writing!!!!

[Vicodin (DJ Spins)]

Needs work...

Very random. This needs more a chord progression and a more rythming and pulsing drum beat.

[|Bass Loop|]

It's ok, but....

Don't start the percussion off with symbols. Always start with bass drum if your doing something like that. And bring up the Brass line one octave. you have it so low that it's classing with itself.

These are just suggections. I'm not expert at dubstep, but I know you shouldn't be using as much symbols..... and try to get a faster beat. Also, I hear a cool digital midi in hear to make is more complex.

If you get a chance, please reveiw my work as well. I wish you luck!! :)

[Crying Piano]

Nice idea, ready for development

I can see a lot of room for expansion here. You have a basic theme, now develop it by adding different instruments. I hear this thing going in all sorts of directions. At :40 I hear a whole bunch of other instruments coming in, and maybe changing the theme from sad to happy, signifying a change in the mood. :) Have it end with a really uplifting sound.

That's just what I hear, I know you were going for a certain "sad" theme, however, the way it starts with that pulsing beat sets it up for something more. You have a great musical idea here. Now you just have to develop and expand it to make it a fully completed musical thought.

Good Luck, and if you want, please check out my works.

DetiousMusic responds:

I sure will, thanks for the feedback.
And yeah, this was more experimental than anything.
I plan to take this melody and use it elsewhere.
But where? I do not know.
I'll figure something out eventually. :D

[BCT - Environment]

<3 Glad to see this.

:) I'm really glad you made this. :) It's awesome.

I think at the ending, you should have repeated the first "Little Brother" part on more time at the end. It would have made it more complete. Also maybe add some midi reverb sounds at the end.

Over wise it was great!!!

BummerCityTown responds:

Thank you! Go Green

[When The Clouds Fall]

Awesome

The drum beat was weird at first, but overall it is good. :)

[As Fragile as a House of Cards]

>.<

That weird skidding noise that happens every once in a while reminds me of the sound that the Inception Dream machine makes. :)

This is very weird, but totally random. I guess it was good for ambient music though. :)

MunroKelly responds:

Aha, I can't remember what the Inception Dream Machine sounds like so I'll assume it is a good sound. A mighty fine sound.

Most of the stuff I post is a lot better with headphones, as you can't hear a lot of the quieter sounds otherwise. And thanks man. (Y)