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It's ok, needs mixing

The poor quality really messes with it. Everything else is really cool. It would be a 9/10 if the quality were better

FromWithinReach responds:

Thanks, yeah as i stated in description it was just an idea recording so the quality is poor

5/5

This was very well written. There is a really smooth, flowing feel to it. Beautiful. I feel like it should have had more of a build up at the end. This sort of piano peice feels like it has a story line going to it; one that is not fully developed in this composition.

:) Just ideas. Excellent work!!!

loved it!!

This is so awesome sounding, however the synth at 1 minute is a little obnoxious. I love the way it builds up. Excellently mixed and mastered. What programs did you use???

E-o-e responds:

Thanks :D yeah the simple saw wasn't made to be on it's own that much :D but it kinda works. I used Fruity loops, various samples for the drums and hi hats, styrus for the gated synth, 3osxc for the saw lead and the bell like synth I used massive :D But thanks again XD

-EoE-

Pm me if you wanna know more :D

Much Better lol.

1: throughout this, I hear a lot of frequency changes/ volume pulses.... (?). Which ever effect you used here, you should level it out a bit. It sounds like it's coming from the base... Very noticable at 2:17, and it again distracts from the overall sound.

2: <3 at 2:55

3: Also liked the ending. I like how it reached a climax, however, you might want to think about adding a "resolution", or return the the original theme, and downgrade from there. Just a suggestion, I don't know what your going for here. Is this part of the story line??

WinglessStudios responds:

I'll send you the lyrics in a message and it might help you understand ^^ The volume changes I wish I could pinpoint the source but I think I know what to do to fix it :D THanx for the hints and tips! THanx for the review :D

4/5

haha, pretty good, but it needed more of a beat. I really liked the frequency changes though, and the build up. I felt like it could be worked more. I felt unfinished.

TreeDonkey responds:

good review, i really agree. the kick drum needs to be louder so you can actually hear it haha. maybe need to turn down a few layers too.
thanks for the review!

4/5

loved you accent!!! haha, the piano part was really amazing, however, I think it could have been better without lyrics. :)

Really cool sound

lol. Sounds like the intro to a really cool race car game. :) What program and effects did you use??

I loved the resonation beats that you had at the beginning. How did you do that???

sonicExplorer responds:

I wrote up the core of the song on Garage Band using MIDI instuments and added a lot of the special effects using Mixcraft- to get some of the beat I make two tracks and set each to a different pan then alternate drum hits or delay one of the tracks a fraction of a beat.

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review.

beatiful!!

I absolutely loved it!!! The lyrics, guitar and singing, worked really well together.

What efects did you use on the guitar part?

giovanni808 responds:

The guitar is a vst from a guitar pack in Nexus 2, and it's effects is chorus, reverb and a little bit of delay :) And thanks for the review!

OMGOSH

Winnie the pooohhhhh!!!! <3

This was so great.

i never know what to write hear

This had a really good composition, but I think it would have been better if you changed some of the instuments and gave it a more orchestral sound. That's just my suggestion.

I raelly like the section at 1:10. Very good job with the beat!!!!

Feel free to take a lookat my work. Good luck and keep writing. :)
Auroalee

loko-hasta-la-muerte responds:

thanks im agree with you, i could have chose better instruments, but im a little impatient.
i will lookat your work, thx again.

I am an amateur musician and I have been composing music for a year and a half. I hope to beome a professional musician and plan on studying piano performance in college. I hope you like what I have hear to show you. Wish me luck in college!

Age 29, Female

Phoenix AZ

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