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Loved the chorus and strings

This song is really good, but I feel like it needed more bass support for the melody. Consider adding in more string or chorus layers in the begining. Just to make it more complete. :) Other than that, it's a really good idea. keep it up!

trevordude responds:

Thanks a lot! I'll use your feedback for future projects!

whaaaaat, confused?

That first part was... weird. And then the police sirens?? Don't mind me asking, but did you just make a song out of a shooting??

PrognoiseBIG responds:

Hell yeah =)

Loved the vocals

This is really well produced, but there are a few parts where the guitar part could have been stronger (buildup to the climax).

thecoreman responds:

True dat :P Thanks for listening and reviewing!

3/5

It's a good idea. You rap pretty well, but some of your lines seem rushed and unbalanced.
I liked how you layered the voices, and the beat is pretty catchy. Just work on your lyrics. :)

HasanAbulFez responds:

Yeah I completely agree with the rushed part. I banged this out in about 30 minutes (the raping on the track) because I rarely have a chance to use a quality microphone and I was in the office so I can't keep the doors closed. I plan on re doing it. Add to the fact that half of the second part wasn't written by me, I was just being loyal to the person who mane the beat, the hook and some of the lyrics so it was hard to make everything perfect in that amount of time. INshaa Allah though I'm getting my own equipment next month so I can spend the hours needed on the track. Thanks for the fair and unbiased review it is much appreciated. Keep peeled for when I re-do it inshaa Allah.

Really cool sound!

Did you record the guitars, or are those computer generated?? If you recorded them, then awesome job!!! I wish I could record my guitar like that.

Excellence job with production and mastering. 5/5 overall.

KD18 responds:

I actually recorded the guitars using an SM-57 dynamic microphone. Also, thanks for the kind words :D.

Very Abstract!

Loved it! Sounds like something for a video game. like a really cool video game. I really like how you used the instruments, and just the overall abstract sound of it.

Really gentle and nice. Awesome job!

This is really well thought through and developed. You could do a lot with this though, like maybe add in some strings when it reaches the climax. idk, just a suggestion. :) It's excellent the way it is, but I hear so much more in my head when I'm listening.

Neat idea!

It's a cool loop, but I do think you could do a little more with it. Add more to the end or something.

Potayto responds:

I finished it. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/435329

Well Done!

The vocals are kind of weird...... I'm not sure what to think about it. But the whole thing is well put together. It's got a really nice feeling to it.... relaxing almost, even though its a trance song. Good job!!!

MTLane responds:

Thanks bro!

Loved IT!!!!

nice orchestration! This piece has really good and gentle moments. I like how you used the percussion, but it didn't overwhelm the other parts. and the chorus. All the elements are well balanced with each other. Very good job, and keep it up!!

JosephAS1 responds:

It's good to hear that thank you my friend! =)

I am an amateur musician and I have been composing music for a year and a half. I hope to beome a professional musician and plan on studying piano performance in college. I hope you like what I have hear to show you. Wish me luck in college!

Age 29, Female

Phoenix AZ

Joined on 11/20/10

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