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3/5

You can keep the classical piano in the begining, just make sure the transition to the synths is smoother. Also, at some point, try dropping the FQ of the synths and bringing the piano back. I'd be curious to hear how that sounds. Great effects! Keep up the good work.

KowaiKowia responds:

Thanks for the review!
I will keep that in mind when I rework on this piece! :3

5/5

This perfectly captures the mood that the title describes. It's a very flowing piece. Although it's a little repetitive, the solo melody and the chord changes make it very interesting to listen to. It has a clear direction and narrative. Very well designed overall. :)

Bristlestorm responds:

Thanks for the help!

AWwwwwwww!!!

Very beautiful and cute piano piece. It's building up to something though. This would sound really good with a violin solo too, but it's just perfect on it's own. Very nice narrative.

skychase responds:

Thanks auro, in the full version i'll try adding more instruments. :)

5/5

Very catchy beat. Love the FQ changes. The tune works, and it can definently be improved with some neat layering, and maybe a little less distortion. I'd love to see what you can do with it.

4/5

Its nice to hear so lyrics on this site. Your vocals are amazing, and the string effects were really well done. However, seeing the religious references in this song, I think you could maybe add some chorus vocals in the background to highlight the chorus of the song, and provide build up.
Really liked it overall. The guitar part was really good, and everything was really well recorded.

Battle!!

sounds good, but I honestly couldn't see this going with a Space Station. I don't know if you just named it something random, or if you were actually going for that, but it doesn't fit. It sounds like a pre-battle trojan war motif.

Pretty good.....

But it needs more trumpets.

Loved it!! :)

it's very simple sounding, but the effects really make it really cool. It's very abstract and it flows nicely. Awesome job!

Bobox responds:

Thank U :)

Really cool!!

I loved the transition at 2:20ish. This song was really nice to listen to, and I loved how you melded the synths together. Excellent job with all your transitions. :) At 3:30 you should add in a solo synth to signify a climax. I think that would be a good place for it.

also, watch out for all the distortion. You can have some instruments that have distortion, but make some of the synths cleaner to balance it out.

:)

lvidmar responds:

Thanks for the review and vote! I will have to play around with this solo synth thing. Good idea!

pretty good

But it needs more variation. Add in some more melody, and move off that same chord pattern after a while. That would really help. your sound needs some kind of chorus moment, just to change it up and keep the listener interested.

The overall sounds were good, but change is better.

I am an amateur musician and I have been composing music for a year and a half. I hope to beome a professional musician and plan on studying piano performance in college. I hope you like what I have hear to show you. Wish me luck in college!

Age 29, Female

Phoenix AZ

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