I like this version more than the original. <3
Very good use of varrying synths.
The sound has some good sounds to it, but I can tell that this is your first. The song isn't very organized. The introduction of certain instruments could be smoother, like at 1:32. You need to have some kind of a plan when you write stuff. Individualy, this all sounds good, but together, it just doesn't connect.
I would recommend working on each "theme" seperately. see how you can expand each of them, creating a climax and a narrative with each one. You could then combine them later, just make sure you have good transitions, or an solo instrument that carries through most of it to help tie it together.
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Yeah, I Used the demo version for this.. so I wasn't allowed to save it... so I made it all in one session .. Wish I was allowed to save it.. + I made this 2 years ago.. my music is a lot better now... thanks for the review though :D
This is perfect for a intro to a cool game!!!! I would play that game. The chord progression works really well.
However, it doesn't loop well at all. I would fix that, so that the sound is more continuous.
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Never was meant to be a loop but thanks for the review I greatly appreciate it. I am so glad you like it and hope every one else does as well. More or less the way I meant for it to be was that kind of opening that gets you pumped up and ready for what ever is throne at you.
I totally expected this to be just a bunch of random musical mush, but it's not!!! It's very organized, but in a creative way. I love how it flows and the Beat!! This is a great piece of dubstep. :)
Wow. I love to heard how this would sound with all the surround sound. Personally, I thought the breath was a little creepy, and kinda annoying when he was breathing in. I think the loop would have been cooler without it. It a great track of ambience music though. Keep it up.
I did try to link, but for some reason it kept sending me to the main youtube page instead of to a specific video. You might want to check your link.
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Yeah, the original presentation of this piece didn't mix the breathing and the other audio directly, but I had no choice to make it all one combined stereo mix for NG. Based on your comments, perhaps I'll lower the volume level of the breathing for this mix and re-upload.
Oh, and NG always automatically puts spaces in URLs, it's unavoidable. Just have to remove them and the link will work. :)
Thanks for the review!
This is sooooo GREAT. I cant totally see the erth ending right now. the synths create a erie sense of destruction, that is really peaceful too. Very good combination of effects to create that imagery. Usually, I don't care for ambience stuff, but this flows nicely and tells an interesting story. It's not just some boring loop.
It's kinda weird how it just drifts off though. I think it might be better if you give it a more conclusive ending.
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really cool. (and by cool, I mean nerdy)
wow, this was really cool. At first the rythm didn't really seem consistent, but it works. The "white sound" of you lyrics actually raelly help the lyrics. I could see this being a nerds new theme song. :)
This is so excellent.
I don't try to sound nerdy...it's just my voice, haha.
Sounds like something you would hear in a modern coffee house. The way the music pulses really proves a great rythm without relying to much on the drum beat. However, it seems really stuttered too. You need to find a way to unify the song more without loosing that beat. Maybe just have on synth sound (otehr than the solo) that carries through the whole piece.
Also it could be longer. Try dropping out the synth beat to just leave the continuous sound. That will give the listener some relief, and also make it availible for you to bring the synth beat back in later.
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Music is always the best way to get things out. A pretty good cover, but the audio quality could be improved. It's very distorted and echo-y. it does did it a very mellowed out quality. if the sound is controlled, you could really make it sound good.
Yeah, I can tell what you mean. xD
I was trying to make it sound like a recording from the 1960's, because a lot of old rock and roll back then had that "reverb" sound. Perhaps that wasn't an appropriate thing for this kind of song.
The bass beat is a little annoying. Try making it lower, or not quite as loud. it's very in your face the way it stands right now.
The reason why it sounds unfinished to you is because you end the song effectively at 1:22. The whole piece just dies down, and never comes back up again. And yet it still staggers along for another minute almost.
That release is fine, good in fact, but you can't just drag that on forever! You need a climax that develops from it. When you bring the instruments back up, change keys, maybe add a new instrument, and then bring it back down to it's most basic elements (briefly), THEN the song will truely feel complete.
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I'm not the best at equalizing and the headphones I use when producing suck so when I finish it and play it on something else, it's only then that I realize what needs to be turned up or down, but definitely noted for the bass part
I'll just take out the outro for now and make it into a loop
I usually have climaxes and stuff but this particular piece I was trying different things to avoid having the same structure in every song
Everything else is noted and I'll see what i can do about another instrument and/or riff
Also, I'm considering doing vocals in this piece
What's your take on that?
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